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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa 
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Domestic Silence her defence, Silence her defiance, from black and blue and red, Pressure of work... excuses, Pressure of life... excuses, "Why can't you be like her", To walk that tightrope, sometimes to succeed in blessed quiet, to often to falter, an oblivion of scars, A heart deceiving, for times that where becomes a tight-lipped line of strength, And he so very very weak. Olias. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Olias, it is good to see you again. I have missed you! And this, sir, shall speak to many. I read it three times. I heard three different stories.... the sign of a poet! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Will agree with Sunshine, many different ways to read this. Thoughtful write, Olias. |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Sunshine, Thanks for the welcome home, its been a while, now if I can just figure out how to stick around, my lifes like water on a griddle time or talent evaporates very quickly. Thanks for replying and take care. Duncan, I'm glad you enjoyed the read, many thanks to you for dropping by its much appreciated, be well. Regards to you both, Olias. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh gosh this touched me. I wonder does he see his gentleness as weakness? I really enjoyed these words. I hope you will be sharing more with us. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Intriguing write, Olias. Very interesting.  All writing comes |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sounds as if someone is beating herself/himself up for not being perfect. A pondering write. |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Startime, Thanks for your kind reply its much appreciated. I will try and drop in when ever I can. Take care. Lone Wolf, Glad you enjoyed the read, Thank you. Midnitesun, Yes relationships are often a quandry thanks for dropping by, I hope you enjoyed. Regards to you all, Olias. |
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