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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2001-11-20 01:45 AM


I see you as you dream
Thoughts in clouds
With broken seams
I sow them up
and in our sky
Pop them once
and watch them fly
I jump in one
with me inside
Now the future’s
open wide
Sailing, flailing,
madly wailing
The tether to your mind is lost
To the sea, Oblivion
Let not our love
be down there tossed


[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 11-20-2001).]

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Robert William Gruhn
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1 posted 2001-11-20 02:15 AM


So, if you drown Walt, will your love be lost? Thanks! Oh yuh! Robert
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2 posted 2001-11-20 03:34 AM


As long as both heads are up in the clouds, nothing is lost!  You know Walt, this had a nice gentle feel to it, I really liked this one.

~*~  Carpe' Diem  ~*~

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3 posted 2001-12-03 09:38 PM


A simple, request..beautifully done in poetry. Miss ya, Walty!  

Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since

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4 posted 2001-12-04 09:39 AM


Beautiful Walt!  
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2001-12-04 09:47 AM


Wayout,
Sounds like a hot air balloon to me. LOL enjoyed.

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6 posted 2001-12-04 09:59 AM


A lovely poem this is, Walt.
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7 posted 2001-12-05 11:34 AM


I love this... whimsical and tender all at once. *S* Well done, wow!
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