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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2001-11-20 01:31 AM



you're all a bunch of phonies and fakes
sometimes i'll say whatever it takes
to get you to love me
love me
please dont ever
not love me

i'm pretty i'm adorable
twice stitched to never tear
i'm seamless dreamless
i come with loving care
eternal guarantee
you have to love me
love me

i don't swing my head in the air
to the wanting sound of another
i'm not a phony or a fake
i only love you and i will
'til one day my string will break

© Copyright 2001 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2001-11-20 01:45 AM


Walt? you are loved and that is in no way faked.  
Nan
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2 posted 2001-11-20 08:52 AM


You look suspiciously like the "Skipper" to me, my friend... GOOD poem, though..
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3 posted 2001-11-20 08:53 AM



'Twas the party of make-believe, I do believe, Nan....

Keep a tight hold on that string, Sir Walt...we don't need you landing in poetic mid-stream....

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