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Robert William Gruhn
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since 2001-11-06
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0 posted 2001-11-20 01:16 AM


For you alone....it's only for you
Writing my heart's expressions
My wild burning discontents
Others reacting without talking

Knowing you're always there
Reading every single line
Truly all that matters
Watching me from Heaven



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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-11-20 08:54 AM



Now this....

likes me.....

wornways
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2 posted 2001-11-20 09:03 AM


this is so sweet. i enjoyed the sentiments expressed. the last line tied the full expression up perfectly with solid closure. it likes me, too. i'm sure the one in heaven enjoys it more than any of us here.  

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