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0 posted 2001-11-20 12:41 PM


The trees...sigh your name
My ears... hear the same
The space of which your beauty travels
In my eyes, it still unravels
The kind of poem that I admire
I can read and never tire
My eyes as they look at you
Thank the artist for what they drew

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Nan
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1 posted 2001-11-20 08:42 AM


Very nice, Front Page - short but sweet - what a treat...
wornways
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2 posted 2001-11-20 09:16 AM


  wow, this is great. it brings a poem to mind... hrrm... ah, "God The Artist", by Angela Morgan. it's probable that this poem exists on-line somewhere...

  *quick search*

  wowzers, found a few copies out there that are said to be from angela morgan, but they've been reworked most unscrupulously. i've just fired off a few badgering emails to the web masters of the offending sites with instructions on how to introduce the poem as "based" on God The Artist by Angela Morgan, and not "by". anyway, this copy here is "by" Angela Morgan:

    http://www.moongear.com/thebearypatch/pc37.htm

  it's an old poem. but, i get the feeling you'll be able to appreciate it. enjoyed this poem of yours. i love it when people have the talent of ryming words without strict cadence. when i try to do this i flop, but you have the knack.   nicely done.

WARNING: this reader is not prone to terse, canned comments.

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3 posted 2001-11-20 09:34 AM


I like this a lot, good write.
Sandra

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4 posted 2001-11-20 11:55 AM


this is just beautiful...helen
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5 posted 2001-12-09 06:02 PM


Yes..this one leaves me with the thought that God is the artist..which of course..He is..

And you..are the artist of the short and sweet beauty. I love it!

I am many.

Virgo_Rains
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6 posted 2001-12-10 06:08 PM


This is a very beautiful poem...it touches than draws deep upon your own poetic palette...

VR

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7 posted 2001-12-10 06:12 PM




(big hugggsssssss) And we always love and admire all the beautiful words and visions you display in verse too! (smiles) You are such a beautiful artist to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Rogue24
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8 posted 2001-12-10 06:46 PM


Being a portrait and wildlife artist I found myself drawn into your simple yet expressive words! Very nicely done! HUGS
Ter.  

Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace.

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