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Robert William Gruhn
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since 2001-11-06
Posts 168
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0 posted 2001-11-19 11:55 PM


No fans in hell
McVeigh requesting one now
For hot summer ahead
Can't blow away guilt

Still in remorseless cell
Wanting now to live
No one more undeserving
Laughing at his victims

Feel the heat Tim?
Not of scorching sun
But of burning Hades
Just around the corner

Years torchering victim's families
Only days from over
Cold needle quietly waiting
Ashcroft sealing your fate

Won't be long now
Awakening to victim's faces
Screaming in your ears
This your eternal reward

O.J. your soul mate
No worry being lonely
He'll be along later
You and Lucifer waiting



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wornways
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since 2001-10-18
Posts 204
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1 posted 2001-11-20 09:29 AM


very well done. you remind me of Bruce Shelton, a poet at the starlite cafe (www.thestarlitecafe.com). i think you two should go bowling. your writing and sentiments are nearly the same.

tim, oj, others... it's so easy to hate them, isn't it? but i beg you realize, this is part of the dark one's plan -- to use these people to manifest and root hatred. i would be interested in seeing you write a poem of compassion for tim, sorry that he couldn't turn his heart, saddened that he must suffer in the place we all know he's going...

at age 14 i had an NDE ... very solid and real one. i was not yet with god at that time, and i saw the place called hell... i wrote about it. perhaps i'll post it... it is the place, quite likely, where tim is going, along with oj and others who live in darkness... i would not wish it on anyone, period. it is my hope that every heart would turn from darkness, period. i'd really be interested in seeing you write a poem that expresses an appologetic sentiment rather than a hateful one. let god work on your heart, not the dark one through folks like tim and oj.

WARNING: this reader is not prone to terse, canned comments.

RosePetal
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2 posted 2001-11-21 12:28 PM


Tim got what he deserved, when you kill others you deserve to die. Now O.J, who knows if he really did it but if he did, I wonder how he goes on living and if he has a conscience. Good Write!
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