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Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
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Charlotte, NC

0 posted 2001-11-19 05:18 PM



Chains Unlocked
AMK
11/3/01

Today I sit here reminiscing of when you and I first met on that fateful day
I remember the gentle feelings of my heart, when love first made its stay
In the midst of another love, I was confused and
feeling very sad indeed
Never in a million years, did I think your love would be what I would so desperately need

You have unlocked the chains around my heart and made me feel whole
It's true my darlin baby...I love you completely...
body, heart, and soul
Through the past two months, it's been a pleasure to feel the gift of your amazing love
I lift my eyes to the Heavens, and quietly thank our Lord above

Once I was dark and cold, and traveling upon a path
unknown
Amazing to think how in such a short time, my love for you has blossomed and grown
You caught my fall at the most crucial time, letting me know you cared
I trusted in what you said, and the feelings inside my heart, even though I was scared

We've come such a long way honey, from that wonderful day two months ago
So many nights of passion, I just lay there holding you in my arms enjoying the beautiful afterglow
There are so many reasons that I love you as I do
Too many to list on this page, but you can believe that my love is true

Perhaps it's your laugh, or the way that you say my name
Maybe it's the way I know you won't hurt me, how I know you won't play a game
Then again, maybe it's your smile, and how my life you light
All these are reasons that I long to make you my lifetime partner, to hold you tight

You unlocked the chains, you taught me how to love again, to enjoy life as I should
Making me feel things I thought I had long buried, making me experience emotions deeper than I thought I could
I think of you each and everyday, you are so very precious to me
It is my hope that our love can last forever, an eternity

I know you love me as I love you, I hear it in your voice on the line
There is no doubt inside of me, that I am yours and you are mine
You show your love as I show mine, and it's a love that is strong and right
Your sweet voice is the last thing I hear before I sleep, and you are with me when I awake in morning light

I long for the day I can take you in my arms, and love you tender and sweet
It will be the happiest day of my life of twenty four years, the day that we meet
Your lips will find mine, as our hearts shall come together as one
Thus the beginning of the rest of our lives together will have begun

I won't promise our path will be easy, but good things come to those that wait
I don't know much in this life, but I know our love was born from destiny and fate
So tonight as I pen this from my heart to yours, I hand you my heart, strings attached
I don't care what your horoscope says about Aquarius being detached

This Aries will take her chances, and bet on our love, and it is my deepest wish that we always remain together
But if for any reason we part my sweet darlin, please remember I will love you forever
For once a love like this comes inside the heart, it is a seed that is forever bound
Because of you , I looked inside my heart and this beautiful love is what I found


"Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't
mean they don't love you with all they have"


[This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 11-19-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
1 posted 2001-11-19 05:26 PM


*sigh* love and passion have truly unlocked the chains of your heart. BRAVO!!!This is magnificent. I too hope it lasts forever for both of you.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
2 posted 2001-11-19 08:43 PM


Beautiful write, sweet Amy.  Very well expressed.  Your love is very lucky indeed to have such a wonderful heart to hold.  I hope it lasts forever for you both.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Sven
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since 1999-11-23
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East Lansing, MI USA
3 posted 2001-11-19 09:54 PM


this Virgo hopes that it's "in the stars" for you my friend. . .  

great job. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Carol Lina
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since 2001-11-18
Posts 94
USA
4 posted 2001-11-19 10:16 PM


24?  Oh, sweetheart, this pours out with so much love. So much love....blessings to you and I hope you are in his arms very soon!

Carolina

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2001-11-19 10:17 PM


Virgo huh Sven?  I'm a Leo with a Virgo moon and Virgo rising...an Aries and an Aquarian...that would work!  Very nice piece here sweet Amy!  Hope you always stay so in love and loved.
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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