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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Lonely, gazing toward the moon lonely, could it please end soon? Facing days and nights of this nothing left but one last kiss. Lonely, as the stars do shine shooting down in fiery lines longing for an end to such dreamless sleep, memories touch. Lonely, sitting on a rock tides are as a ticking clock washing all of life away Can one truly live this way? Empty, yet so full with love empty, there is no use of Still on-the torture of the heart lonely-living life apart. [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 11-19-2001).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I find the way to make it thru times such as this is to focus on what I have...not what I am missing or don't have... for example if I lose my love I have gained my freedom...perhaps I would rather be in love...but not within an empty relationship...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Empty, yet so full with love empty, there is no use of Still on-the torture of the heart lonely-living life apart. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Some day very soon Sandra...your knight is going to ride up to you! You have sooo much to give...and I believe a knight can sense that. Lovely, melancholy write. Hugs. ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Lonely, as the stars do shine shotting down in fiery lines longing for an end to such dreamless sleep, memories touch. lonely is a terrible feeling.... nicely done my friend..... |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Lonely, gazing toward the moon lonely, could it please end soon? ---------- Yes....."Could it please end soon?" Such a sad heartfelt write..... It would all end soon hopefully dear Sandra..... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
You will have your Knight, Sandra, and when you do the lonely days you have spent will vanish in the wind. Take care, dear one, he will find you. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Carol Lina Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 94USA |
We should commiserate in verse, one Catalina moon and one Carolina moon or something like that. (((((hug))))) Carolina |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Thanks everyone, as always, I feel better after letting it out a little, and your kind remarks. Sandra |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
It is very lonely for sure. But, I am with James. You have to focus on your blessings. Even though you may not currently have a love, you have much to be thankful for. Nice write.  All writing comes |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, Just beautiful....I hope the sadness and empty feeling ends soon. You deserve so much better...... Love, Elise |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
They who dwell within their past, stay. They who take a painful step, show courage. A child would not have taken a first step if it were afraid to fall. You deserve to take that first step...for with failures comes wisdom...with wisdom comes success...and love of self... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I wish for you all of the happiness in the world. And a love that will never end. |
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