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My Defined Love
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My Defined Love |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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My Defined Love Love is so easy to say yet so hard to define There's love in a friendly way a gesture that grows in time There's love so strong and so bold for some it could do no wrong for others a burden to hold It can show you a good time in the light of romance it can upset a passionate crime if given the chance No matter how yours can be defined always remember the doors which yeild loves threshold in your mind |
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Carol Lina Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 94USA |
you have chosen a difficult topic to write of...love...well done! Carolina |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very well said. "No matter how yours can be defined always remember the doors which yeild loves threshold in your mind" |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I see that the general post today consist of this, it does take difficulty and ease both depending how one reads ... that is why it is important to understand what it is to you, before understanding what it is to someone else ... What is one's Happiness can also be another's burden. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Craig, Yes...the posts today seem to be all about L-O-V-E. Guess I should take my pen in hand instead of sitting here for hours reading... but, it's like being in a card shop..and, I am addicted!! LOL...good write btw. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I do so understand what you mean ... sometimes I do not have the time to comment but I do try to make the time to read ... Passions is full of life these days ... I find it addicting as well. Thank you for your comments , one and all. [This message has been edited by ctowen (edited 11-19-2001).] |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
It's interesting to see the way you wrote about both sides of love.I enjoyed this. Peaches |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
They are hand in hand .... to have one only means the other is not far away ... its all how you perceive it. Thank you for your comments. |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Great poem for a hard word people feel condemned to express. Do or die! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
ctowen, Very well written  I like the flow you always have in your writings. I always enjoy reading you Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
What is love but just a thought feelings which someone has wrought Confused, on a better day Never knowing what to say.. Well, anyway I like this, very thoughtful. Sandra |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
And yet, on the other hand elusive as it may seem shifting through the timeless sand is the way to find your dream Thank you for commenting. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
No matter how yours can be defined always remember the doors which yeild loves threshold in your mind --------------------- A difficult topic, indeed. The last lines sum it all so well and eloquently..... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ [This message has been edited by MyEnchanted_Melody (edited 11-19-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!! Leave it to you, Craig, to write the definition of love so very well. This is one that will fit most of us. I love it. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Nicely done, Craig. You've done a great job of illustrating how love can be both a blessing and a burden. Just depends on the person. Great work! All writing comes |
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