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Robert William Gruhn
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since 2001-11-06
Posts 168
California, USA

0 posted 2001-11-19 01:18 PM


Are you out of my mind.... yet?


I asked you to leave long ago


Still you remain


Driving your craziness home


Where it doesn't belong


Never leaving this heart alone


Again last night


Stomping and crashing into my dreamscapes


Can't you just leave our past behind?


We lived together


Then love died there


You can't go back


And I won't


To do that requires desire


That distant empty ghost


No longer exists


My love for you is gone


Found out it can't survive


Amidst nothing


Your love for me


Was never there


Just lust dressed in deceit's clothing


But you keep calling


Wondering if I've changed


My mind


Only have one of those


And it can't forget


The treachery of your lies


Your tears of false emotion


Go ahead


Rip this brain from my head


My heart will still remember


Damage already done


Only true love can repair it


Don't you get it?


You can't conquer love


It must conquer you


Passion so very fleeting


Without real love to refill it


© Copyright 2001 Robert William Gruhn - All Rights Reserved
Carol Lina
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since 2001-11-18
Posts 94
USA
1 posted 2001-11-19 01:20 PM


This is very intense...wow

Carolina

peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04
Posts 981
OK, USA
2 posted 2001-11-19 01:30 PM


Very powerful words.WOW.You will find that true love one day.
Peaches

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2001-11-19 01:50 PM


FANTASTIC!!!

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
4 posted 2001-11-19 08:32 PM


Out of your mind..but not quite. Those  dreams always try to bring things back, I know.
Good write.
Sandra

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
5 posted 2001-11-19 08:45 PM


Sometimes when we love someone even if they hurt us badly we cannot seem to forget them. I hope you are able to find a love that is honest and true, Sir Robert. You deserve the best, my friend. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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