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vandana
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0 posted 2001-11-19 10:55 AM



Do you ever feel
How am I?
Inside my heart,
I always feel the same,
And whenever I sleep,
Whisper your name,
Think of dream
being with you,
and I wonder,
If you are thinking
How am I?
Feeling for you,
you know,
I always feel the same
for you,
will always love
Till we part,
I know,
you are feeling the same
As I am feeling for you,
I promise,
I never change my feeling
for you,
Because you are the one who
makes my dream come true,
You know,
How am I?
and then you take my hand
and make me smile
through these clouds,
you know,
How am I?
Every word I say?
Is true,
Because I know
How I feel for you,
How am I?

[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 11-19-2001).]

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Carol Lina
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since 2001-11-18
Posts 94
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1 posted 2001-11-19 01:15 PM


How are you? Open and loving, this is wonderful!

Carolina

peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04
Posts 981
OK, USA
2 posted 2001-11-19 01:31 PM


Shows that you have a very loving heart and are a very compassionate person.Good write.
Peaches

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2001-11-19 02:06 PM


I hope that your love is not too far away for a kiss and an embrace...James
Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2001-11-19 02:10 PM


I find it to be somehow comforting when someone asks how I am, even when I don't wish to reply, and they accept that as the answer.
A very good read, Vandana. I enjoyed.
And how are you today?

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
5 posted 2001-11-19 02:15 PM


How am I?
and then you take my hand
and make me smile
through these clouds,
you know,
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
This is very special...I often have these same thoughts.  Well done!  And, if I were to ask, how are you?  I hope you answer that you are happy and feeling terrific!  
Hugs, Nancy.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
6 posted 2001-11-19 04:40 PM


*sigh* a beautiful heartfelt poem that touched me deeply. Very well said. You have a tender and loving heart and it shows in what you write.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

catalinamoon
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since 2000-06-03
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The Shores of Alone
7 posted 2001-11-19 08:23 PM


I hope you are appreiated, at all times.  
Sandra

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
8 posted 2001-11-19 08:25 PM


You are wonderful, I hope he sees that too.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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