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A TEAR (dedicated to Gene during this time of pain)
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A TEAR (dedicated to Gene during this time of pain) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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If you want to know what is happening with Gene just go to Discussions and Announcements. A Tear A tear, unseen from deep within longing heart starts to fall from lashes no longer able to hold back this pain A single tear streaks cheek with salty wetness as it leads the way for the path of many more tears to follow that the pain of a heart who feels alone and lost without love of friends to help lift his hurting spirit and hold his heart safe in this time of indecision now placed within a heart unsure Just from one single tear filled with love Karen Torbiak 2001© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 11-19-2001).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Startime: To care is a gift that gives much... |
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wornways Member
since 2001-10-18
Posts 204CA, USA |
how interesting. this can't be easy, forming words to ascii art. the tear turned out well, and the words filling it seem genuine and full of emotion. delightfully done. guess i'll go read a bit about gene's perdicterment now. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Absolutely beautifully done Karen. Hugs, Nancy ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
A beuatiful way to show you care. peaches |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Gene? Just so you'll know I DO understand: /pip/Forum51/HTML/001436.html I've an ear to hear should you need. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Ah...what a tear..! You have a wonderful sympathetic soul. And you've done a wonderful job with the format as well. Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Fabulous form and verse, Karen. We all need to know we are not as alone as we think every now and then. You have shown great caring and compassion with this one.  All writing comes |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is such a touching poem, Karen. It's thoughtfulness and caring will be a big hug to a hurting heart. |
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Carol Lina Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 94USA |
This is a wonderful way to offer compassion for another... Carolina |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Karen -- You already know how much I appreciate your friendship and what a beautiful way to show it. This was totally unexpected and I'm very touched.  Everyone -- Thanks to y'all too. I won't go into details here, but if you're interested, you can read my reply here: /pip/Forum3/HTML/001422.html Thanks, Gene |
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