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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2001-11-19 05:57 AM


Each Rose Gifted Token

Pictures sent my way
The August rose of gold
Stood in your garden
Branches you have hold

You picking the roses
The picture I remember
It is among treasures
Saved since September

Those pictures of you
With cap on your head
There among the roses
A peach and velvet red

The soft lavender blue
Yellow and the white
Each rose with beauty
With words you write

All memorised to heart
Joy of words spoken
Held in a special place
Each rose gifted token

Your words and roses
Treasures I can view
Thoughts you express
Dear friend thank you

HopeĀ© 2001

© Copyright 2001 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
Carol Lina
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since 2001-11-18
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1 posted 2001-11-19 07:43 AM



"Peach and velvet red"
OMG this is outstanding!

the visuals, color.    Well done!

Carolina

HopeS
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Perth Western Australia
2 posted 2001-11-19 08:55 AM


Thanks Carol , I am so pleased you enjoyed
yes the colours of the  roses were beautiful
Hope

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
3 posted 2001-11-19 08:57 AM


ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL, HOPE. The vision of this poem is filled with so much beauty and clarity. I love it. Roses are so very beautiful and when sent (even by picture) by someone we care deeply about their beauty is enhanced.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

HopeS
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Perth Western Australia
4 posted 2001-11-19 10:56 AM


Thanks for your kind sweet reply Karen
yes the poem was helped along by seeing the wonderful roses he grows
Hope

MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
5 posted 2001-11-19 12:43 PM




Your words and roses
Treasures I can view
Thoughts you express
Dear friend thank you

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Such a beautiful lovely piece...

I loved it...
Thank you
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peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04
Posts 981
OK, USA
6 posted 2001-11-19 01:17 PM


You show such beauty through your words.I love the colors of the roses.
Peaches

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
7 posted 2001-11-19 02:40 PM


It sounds like the words he said
found their reach
to heart, those of colour read
his heard speech

My, this had a huge smile painted all over it!!
It looks beautiful from here dear Hope!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
8 posted 2001-11-19 02:46 PM


Hope, I could actually feel, see, and smell the roses as I read this.  
Beautiful images painted here today.  
Thank you.  hugs, Nancy.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Lone Wolf
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Lansing, MI USA
9 posted 2001-11-19 09:03 PM


Stunning imagery, Hope.  The visuals of the roses were just lovely!!  Thank you for sharing.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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