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peaches73533
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0 posted 2001-11-19 01:42 AM


There's a land that I dream of at night.
Where beauty is held in my sight.
The sky is clear and blue.
The sun starting to melt the morning dew.
Green, rolling. luscious hills.
And beautiful birds with beautiful bills.
The water is rippling against the shores.
Where such stories it has in store.

As the sun begins to set.
My dreams not quite finished yet.
The moon comes out in all it's brightness.
As does the lighthouse that shows us guidance.
As I lay down in the cool green grass.
The moon shines off the water like a colored glass.
The millions of stars in the sky.
Makes my heart soar oh so high.
The sounds of nature and the sounds of the night.
Completly fill me with delight.

And as I close my eyes each night.
I know I'm ready to take that flight.
To the wonderful dreamland I have in my mind.
For me it is easy to find.

Peaches

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Blackdrake
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Depends on the day :)
1 posted 2001-11-19 02:07 AM


We all seem to have our own little worlds. It seems to me of we did not, we would all go insane...  hehe    ...   I believe dreams are our only true possessions, thank you for sharing yours

Mysterious is the shadow, walking down the path of light.  ~~ ¥ ~~



peaches73533
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2 posted 2001-11-19 02:41 AM


Blackdrake:Thank you.Sharing helps me.

Peaches

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2001-11-19 08:00 AM


Nice place for dreams, I think I should visit.
Well done.
Sandra

Moon Dust
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4 posted 2001-11-19 12:02 PM


ah this reminded me of my own little world its quite cool

I breathe the dust, the dust is me.


peaches73533
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5 posted 2001-11-19 01:05 PM


catalinamoon: It's a wonderful place to visit

MoonDust: Glad you liked it.

Peaches

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
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Canada
6 posted 2001-11-19 05:03 PM


I love it...it is just the right place for me to go and weave my fantasies. BRAVO!!!  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
7 posted 2001-11-19 05:17 PM




Oh..What a nice place to be!...
I'd love to go there....Would you take me  , pleeeeeeease.

A really wonderful and lovely poem...

Thank you
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peaches73533
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OK, USA
8 posted 2001-11-19 07:44 PM


Startime: Thank you.It's a great place for me too.

MyEnchantedMelody: Thank you and yes I will take you with me.I would take any friends that wanted to go.

Peaches

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia
9 posted 2001-11-19 08:02 PM


Peaches
We all have our special places and treasured dreams and this was lovely.  Take care...Sue

Suetang

Lone Wolf
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10 posted 2001-11-19 08:06 PM


This sounds like a lovely place, peaches.  We all need a place where we can go and dream.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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