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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2001-11-19 12:46 PM


Splendefirous, wunnerful poem you got!
It twas really awesome and required some thought!
I think I understood it so I’ll say "WOW Yuh!
Anything else is more than I’ll allow yuh

Your mind is deep as the river is wide
Your poem was stupendous all giggly inside
Snickers and sniggles, your poem was funny
Hope it was spozed to be as my nose is runny

I cried a lonely tear drop, your poem was sad
I can’t say this, but I think it was bad
Your poem was pretty as your poet name
Wishing to woo you I wont say it was lame

Your poem was awesome, no really, I mean it!
I know I’m generic I think you have seen it
"Great job", "good job", "excellent post"!
But this time I think your poem’s the most

Poetry in motion is what Passion’s about
Some get big replies and some go without
Here is a reply to this poem I'm writing
"It was awesome! Terrific! Totally exciting!"


[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 11-19-2001).]

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Larry C
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1 posted 2001-11-19 12:49 PM


Walt,
It was awesome! Terrific! Totally exciting! you said it! O yuh!  

[This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 11-19-2001).]

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2 posted 2001-11-19 12:52 PM


*giggling* can't be helped....I am a giggler.... But you have to admit Walt you write to make us laugh and yes cry too sometimes. I respond emotionally to every poem I read. That is just me and sometimes it has gotten me in trouble when the poem was not about the person. Oh well.....I will just have to keep responding from the heart so here goes. *giggling with delight* this is a wonderful poem and I am glad you cheered yourself on it too.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

wayoutwalt
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3 posted 2001-11-19 12:56 PM


before anyone gets mad let it be known I am making fun of the way I reply to others. O yuh!
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4 posted 2001-11-19 01:02 AM


Walt,

       I like this. *chuckles* It had a fun feeling and good flow.  Thanks for sharing it

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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5 posted 2001-11-19 07:56 AM


LOL sometimes I feel too generic too, can't seem to write a spontaneous poem on a poem like others can. I'm with you Walt. Awesome OYUH
Sandra

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6 posted 2001-11-19 09:55 AM



Cute, too!  You forgot CUTE!

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7 posted 2001-11-19 10:15 AM


Walt~
Oh yuh, Boo-Boo ... you ain't so shabby yourself~
Tee-Hee ! Clever~
Thankee, friend~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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8 posted 2001-11-19 09:27 PM


O Yuh! Feel free to grace me with one of your stupendous replies whenever you like! O Yuh! What's that? I have to actually write a poem to get a reply?   Now I get it! O Yuh!  
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9 posted 2001-11-19 09:45 PM


WALT...WHAT CAN I SAY THAT HASN'T BEEN SAID??  You are way too cool!  Passions stage is yours sir!  Nancy.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

wayoutwalt
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10 posted 2001-11-19 09:51 PM


Big smiles and O yuhs!
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11 posted 2001-11-19 10:37 PM


A yuh from you is a wonderful thing .... gives me a smile each time I see one! Much enjoyed Walt!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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12 posted 2001-11-19 10:44 PM


~Me too, definately me too. A smile. For a yuh. Yeah. This is cool, (and neat and can't be beat, Walt). *Peace.
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13 posted 2001-11-19 10:45 PM


oh yuh!!  
doreen peri
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14 posted 2001-11-19 10:48 PM


oh whoops... i forgot to ask... who is that in the new pic? gilligan and the skipper too? *wink*

where's ginger and marianne?

aww never mind... off doing the hula somewhere writing pomes about it or something....

hehe... yuh! loved this Sir WOW!!.... 'twas wunnerful!!!

wayoutwalt
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15 posted 2001-11-19 11:32 PM


O YUH I THE SKIPPER and gilligan is cruz
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16 posted 2001-11-20 12:45 PM


ah yeah, is this a reposttostees?  coolio...now check your mobileattnet mail skipper...
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17 posted 2001-11-20 12:56 PM


Very cute and by the way, a simple "oh yuh" is fine and I'll know you walked on through  

~*~  Carpe' Diem  ~*~

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