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just venting.. sorry.. skip this one
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just venting.. sorry.. skip this one |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever 
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So what was it you had to say to me? "How can I reveal these feelings to you? Even if I could, these I feelings I dont understand.. I dont understand any of this!" What in God's name is going on? Who the hell are you.. What are you going to do.. To stop me from my madness? So what was it you had to say to me? Is there something your mouth has to say? It seems you dont like me much, you know.. You can hate me.. but I'm not stopping now.. You dont seem to be doing anything... You can hate me now... but I wont stop now.. So tell me.. Hate's an illusion, is it? Does that mean love's an illusion, too? Why am I using these primative words? Why couldn't I be born speaking Italian? Their language is pure poetry... So.. where was I? Oh yea.. can anyone tell me what the HELL is going on here? DOES ANYBODY HAVE THE AUDACITY TO TRY AND TELL ME?!?! C'mon, let me hear it... "Cheer up, Joe, you're a likeable guy, you have a loving family and friends.." I dont care how likeable of a guy I am, Because no matter how much I give, I'm always back to square one.. sitting here wondering like a loveless chimpanzee. So I guess I have to find someone to latch on to, is that correct? (THIS LINE EDITED BY MODERATOR) Just because your life's all peachy and wonderful, doesen't mean I give two flying hoots... Just because you found some sucker to sit and listen to all of the crap you have to say.. that makes your life wonderful, now doesn't it? I dont have anything! Ok, I'm wrong, I have the whole world clenched in my fist! But I still dont have anything! I dont have anything..... Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for. [This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 11-21-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh gosh you did vent well didn't you. I don't have answers for you because sometimes I feel the same way. My heart goes out to you for life sucks badly sometimes and then we need to vent as you have here. This is powerful and very good writing no matter how you look at it. **hugs** even if they are just cyber hugs I hope they help a little. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
EagleScorpion, I think my dad used to do some of this and my Grandpa too! Hey, you do a fine job of letting it out. No need to ask how you really feel. But I must say, I can hardly wait to see the fun side of you. Because if it's half as intense as the angry side, you're a great and funny guy. So I have no rosie pointless pictures to offer you. But I can say...bring it on. You don't scare me into running away. Just bring it on... Sin isn't fair, but God got even, grace isn't fair either. larry c |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
thanks larry! You know, I'm really feeling alot better now.. I dont know what came over me..please dont take any of this too seriously.. I read it over again and I'm like "Geez, this is horrible.." |
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~lewisone~ Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 91Virginia |
My seniments exactly...Thanks e.s. you saved me alot of writing. I just read your vent and it made me feel so much better.lol Nicely done! ~lewisone~ P.S) You have us! ~hugs comin' at ya~  bhfslloujnvn,l;ehnlkla( me writing in Italian) LOL [This message has been edited by ~lewisone~ (edited 11-26-2001).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
That's what they make heater vents for, so you can safely release all that hot air and then feel better....do you feel better now? Good. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Ok, I'm wrong, I have the whole world clenched in my fist! I think this says it all ...I really liked this line. *s ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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