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Flight of the Mind
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Flight of the Mind |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Thoughts flow like honey From the stinger of a bee Gelling like a serum Sapping from a tree Streaming like a toxin Bobbing in the lake Feeding off the algae Drowning, still awake Rising metamorphic Monstering from its grave Spotted by a tourist A roll of film, he saved Developing my thoughts Still viewers will not budge “That can’t be what he meant It's just a blurry smudge!" [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 11-19-2001).] |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
thoughts... Pumpkin |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Walt, Give us a little credit... Sin isn't fair, but God got even, grace isn't fair either. larry c |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*grin* yes, sometimes our thoughts can be a big mess but then sometimes they congeal into something like this poem that brings a smile to someone's face like it did mine. Well done.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
hehhe I hope this wasn't taken the wrong way yuh...just how thoughts can be misinterpreted |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
nice subject. i think the misinterpretations can be kind of cool. the other day the lead singer from creed was asked the meaning of a particular song he had written; he declined to give the true meaning and stated that the reason he did not want to do so was that he felt everyone has a different interpretation of the song and he did not want to spoil their meaning. and of course when the nail is hit on the head...everything is purfect! |
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