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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida 
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I thought I'd do something different from my usual so here is my spanish poem. Scroll down for the english version if you don't speak spnaish : ) Dos amantes bajo el sol Amistad que prohibe lo que Podriamos convertirnos Somos los mejores amigos Con todo cuando miro en sus ojos, Yo sentimos una pasion profunda Que no puedo describir asi que entierro este interrior de la sensacion abajo tanto felicidad, no puedo tomarla a veces Nuestro enlace es una bendicion especial y podria nunca romperlo Admito, si que usted hace me la sensacion triste ocasionalmente pero nada puede cambiar lo que pienso en usted en mi mente usted es un hombre verdadero y 'esos son duros de encontrar English version- Two lovers under the sun Friendship prohibiting what we could become We are best friends Yet when I look in your eyes I feel a deep passion I cannot describe So I bury this feeling way down inside So much happiness, Sometimes I can't take it Our bond is a special blessing And I could never break it Yes, I admit you make me feel sad at times but nothing could change what I think of you in my mind You're a true man and those are hard to find |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
RosePetal, Hey, I'm impressed. Bi-lingual, eh? So talented too. Nice poem. Excellent thoughts!  |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Un Hombre Duro es Bueno Encontrar!!  |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
perdoname, amiga. A veces pierdo la mente cuando la hora llega tarde como ahora La poema es bellisima |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Oye, yo siempre soy deleitado en recibir una respuesta de usted. Gracias para leer a mi novio del poema |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
el placer es mio...completamente. |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
I don't speak Spanish that well...but the poem was excelente! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Hey..I'm Canadian eh? so I have no spanish in my language at all. *grin* a little french though. LOL Very romantic and very well done. I love it. Thanks for the English version. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sounds to me like you have a wonderful special friend Rose Petals. Sometimes that kind of closeness is not worth the risk. Although, if it is right and meant to be it shall be. All writing comes |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Wow, you sound sooooooo romantic in another language too! (smiles) I can't think of the Spanish version, but the poem can be titled "Simple Passions" in Spanish! (smiles)Besame mucho, mi inamorata! (kiss on cheek) (sigh) I love you, sweet Joanna, you are sooooo romantic! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joanna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Muchas Gracias mi amigos (Thank you my friends) |
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