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Tangled Moonlight

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Greeneyes
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0 posted 11-18-2001 07:38 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Greeneyes


Tangled moonlight
Deep sky, softly
Sweeping desire
Of love
Silky eyes laughing
Intricately weaving
Reflection in a
Silver spring
Clouds among
The rivers bend  
Dancing alone and
Free there upon
The midnights end
A blowing breeze of times  
Surrounds the night in
Purple song
Caressing deeper touches
Golden heaven of passion
Softly sweeping
Love
~~


I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01



[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-18-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Lauren~ - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 11-18-2001 07:41 PM       View Profile for Moon Dust   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Moon Dust

Yes definatly describe that feeling of love and I love it

I breathe the dust, the dust is me.

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Greeneyes

hi there......... a lovely and awesome words  which moved my whole senses

welldone my dear and keep  up the good work
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3 posted 11-18-2001 07:55 PM       View Profile for Startime   Email Startime   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Startime's Home Page   View IP for Startime

Moonlight and romance somehow go together to create magic and you have woven a magical poem filled with them. Absolutely beautiful. I love it.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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4 posted 11-18-2001 08:06 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

BEAUTIFUL!!

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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A picture painted
better than with
a thousand words!
        

I see the rays of the nights coming moon
tangling with the dying light of day,
as the intruding mist rises from
a searching river bed.
I feel at peace with this
vision ...
breathtaking!!

Thank you for
the wonderous
view!!
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ooooohhhh I love the moon..~~~~~~~~~

Carolina

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7 posted 11-18-2001 09:37 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

definitely not as tangled now. . .

great job Lauren. . . a different view here. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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8 posted 11-18-2001 10:54 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Lauren,

this was so beautiful...words flowed
perfectly together panting a beautiful
view for your readers, just beautiful!
take care.
amy  

"Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't
mean they don't love you with all they have"

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9 posted 11-18-2001 11:48 PM       View Profile for Auguste   Email Auguste   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Auguste's Home Page   View IP for Auguste

I can see that your trips to our workshop have paid off.  Your writing has very much improved.  Excellent, my friend.  This is a keeper.   *hugs*

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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10 posted 11-19-2001 10:03 PM       View Profile for PoeticLicense   Email PoeticLicense   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for PoeticLicense

Your words are intricately woven like the finest of lace, enchanting!

PL
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11 posted 11-20-2001 11:46 AM       View Profile for kitkat   Email kitkat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kitkat

Very lovely poem here. I love poems about the moon the stars and Love.

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat

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Peekaboo


Expressive bafflement.  *Grins*

You can't wake a person who is pretending to be asleep. -- Navajo Proverb

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A blowing breeze of times  ... a very  peaceful write, Lauren. Makes one feel contented.

~Wynter

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

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14 posted 11-27-2001 04:18 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

Thanks to all of you who responded to this, I appreciate the comments and thoughts...


be well be safe



Greeneyes~


I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-27-2001).]

Mark Bohannan
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The journies of life and love as seen by you is always such a wonderful treasure of time.  I love the way you bring the freshness of your style and vision to us in such wonderful ways.  Beautiful writing and an excellent read.
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16 posted 11-28-2001 12:29 AM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

Greeneyes - I like your words very much. A very romantic writing, my favorite...

BC
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"A blowing breeze of times  
Surrounds the night in
Purple song"

absolutely gorgeous! I like this part best. just so beautiful  
Greeneyes
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18 posted 11-28-2001 12:37 AM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

oh wow you guys, I am so humbled by these responses....thank you....
Greeneyes~


I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-28-2001).]

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19 posted 04-09-2002 02:04 AM       View Profile for rosepetals25   Email rosepetals25   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rosepetals25

Lauren,

    You ended this so perfectly! So pretty

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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