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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2001-11-18 07:12 PM


Fly with the morning breezes,
Which peppers out the clouds above,
Watch the fog and dew as it freezes,
Float though the sky like a dove,

Take in the morning with your lungs,
Feel the air as you smell fresh scent,
Hold that memory for your daughters and sons,
And strive to protect as was heaven sent,

Turn away those who take all pleasures,
Of taking away your self respect, pride and freedom,
For these are as important as the air you breathe and tresure,
Fly with the morning breezes to freedom.


I breathe the dust, the dust is me.


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Startime
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1 posted 2001-11-18 07:20 PM


Stunning. I could almost feel the freedom of the winds. BRAVO!!!

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2001-11-18 07:47 PM


startime - Thank u for reading and nice comments

I breathe the dust, the dust is me.


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3 posted 2001-12-03 09:33 PM


Oh yes...Mornings with my Dad are something I regret not enjoying more when I was younger. Thankfully, he is still with me today, and when I visit home, I try to get up early and have coffee with him. I never realized how I cherished such peace until I was a little older. Is it just the way things are that we sometimes don't learn any sooner? *sigh* I loved this. Sorry for rambling. It brought back a feelign.  

Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since

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4 posted 2001-12-05 06:57 PM


Thank u for reading Temptess. Hey ramble all you want i'm just to nosey not to listen

I breathe the dust, the dust is me.


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