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Daniel J D
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0 posted 2001-11-18 07:10 PM



The child stands for the future
Tremors, bloodied soldiers, needing a  rest
The child says "thanks Mister
Lay your arms down, it is time for peace"
The child knows what is best.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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Startime
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1 posted 2001-11-18 07:22 PM


*sigh* if only we would listen to the child. This poem brought tears to my eyes. I wonder if our world can ever know peace. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Moon Dust
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2 posted 2001-11-18 07:23 PM


They do I think adults are very childish in some cases.

I breathe the dust, the dust is me.


Enchantress
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3 posted 2001-11-18 07:28 PM


Very well said!!

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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4 posted 2001-11-18 08:57 PM


That says it, I think. THANK YOU.
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5 posted 2001-11-19 08:05 AM


Oh I so agree with you, if only it would go this way.
Sandra

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6 posted 2001-11-19 10:23 AM


enjoy
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7 posted 2001-11-19 09:18 PM


we could learn a lot from them, if only we would take the time to listen.  Excellent, Daniel.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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