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Pang to Ping
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Pang to Ping |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Pang to Ping ~*~ umbilical threads sense to reflection to pen ever outwardly ~*~ glistening beliefs of what once was surely is profundity’s depth ~*~ mundane beginnings sow extraordinary miracles to fore ~*~ shuddering ripples fountains cascading forth source the ping becomes song ~*~ thus words come flowing soft as new found loving comes singing through the mist ~*~ ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 18 November, 2001 |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Well I sure know one thing...your pen sure springs with miracles of talent and perfection. Absolutely wonderful.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Carol Lina Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 94USA |
"newfound loving" sounds pretty good to me right now  Carolina |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Karilea! Lovely! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is wonderful Karilea!! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
shuddering ripples fountains cascading forth source the ping becomes song ~*~ thus words come flowing soft as new found loving comes singing through the mist ============================== a formated syllable count can not hold the gracefulness of your words.... but yet your talent makes it possible. these are lovely poetess Sun...truly.  I would wait till the end of time for you, |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
an interesting style and word play.... nicely done...as usual. Enjoyed.... |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Just simply love it Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Enjoyed this one, Sunshine. All writing comes |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Senryu 101 by Sun ~ so that's how it's done! the ping becomes song (as only you can sing it) from a pang! ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
I enjoyed this one.Beautiful words. Peaches |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The sound of that ping makes me tingle all over. You write so nice Sunshine. |
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