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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-11-18 06:24 PM


Lost in another time and place
no belonging, not here or there
lost in a fog of past life love
I cannot find it anywhere.

Left behind in the dust of dreams
buried under the sands of time
too long to wait, too hard to heal
barely remember he was mine.

Absovled of guilt, not innocence
his exit sharp and undenied
I'm lost, and no one really knows
of the rivers of tears I've cried.

Past time to clarify this life
past caring why his words were knives.

© Copyright 2001 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
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Lansing, MI USA
1 posted 2001-11-18 06:27 PM


Oh, I know this feeling well.  Never easy to accept the loss, but essential in moving ahead.  I think the tears could have filled the ocean on some days.  Please know you are far from alone.  ((((hugs))))

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2001-11-18 06:39 PM


Words seem trite and of not much help. Bug hugs to you Sandra. Love you.  
Balladeer
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3 posted 2001-11-18 06:42 PM


Sure wish I had a happy pill for you, Sandra  
Cerenity
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Escondido-California
4 posted 2001-11-18 07:03 PM


Hi Sandra,

Hey sweetie sending (((BIG-SQUISHES))) to you and I am thinking of you, just seems life is getting harder of late,

Luv ya muches, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
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5 posted 2001-11-18 07:04 PM


~"I'm lost, and no one really knows",...it seems we can never really know exactly what goes on inside of someone, although we can relate in ways, aching for you. *Peace.

Daniel J D
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Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
6 posted 2001-11-18 07:04 PM


For a moment close your eyes, then open while looking up and you will see brightness.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2001-11-18 07:06 PM


Oh Sandra, I just don't know what to say that would help...just hang in there.  Things will get better in time.
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Startime
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8 posted 2001-11-18 07:34 PM


*sigh* my heart goes out to you, Sandra. If only love were not so filled with pain. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
9 posted 2001-11-18 08:02 PM


Thanks everyone, you are all so supportive, its just been one of those hard days. I will brighten up soon.
Sandra

ctowen
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10 posted 2001-11-18 09:40 PM


I swam such rivers
longing for its end,
and chilled with shivers,
I swam through each bend.

The body aches so ...
the mind and soul drained
drowned by what you know
and then have it rained.

To reach the dry ground
you must struggle hard
remember you found
that what you regard

Just one reaching hand
could guide you to land.

Carol Lina
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since 2001-11-18
Posts 94
USA
11 posted 2001-11-18 09:43 PM


Sweetheart, no one is ever truly lost...
we only come to crossroads. I hope you
have a wonderful day tomorrow...ok?

Carolina

vandana
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12 posted 2001-11-19 07:16 PM


enjoy
Sven
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13 posted 2001-11-19 09:58 PM


there's a map in the corner. . . go get it. . .

from your heart my friend. . .

---------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Tracey
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where insanity meets breeding
14 posted 2001-11-19 10:57 PM


And the healing will begin, and there is light at the end of the tunnel. It isn't easy, but a broken heart does mend. Big hugs Sandra

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
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Netherlands
15 posted 2001-11-20 07:18 PM


It's always painful when love ends. It'll take some time to see he wasn't the right person for you, for words should never be knives.

I know I know it's cliché, but most of us have been or will be there. It will strenghten you, be sure of that.

Titia

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peaches73533
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OK, USA
16 posted 2001-11-20 07:44 PM


Sorry that you are in pain.Healing does come and it will get better.Hope you have a good day tomorrow.
Peaches

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