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Robert William Gruhn
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since 2001-11-06
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0 posted 2001-11-18 05:10 PM


Heaven will come true
A belief for many
Something just dreamed of
By others truly skeptical

Doing penance on Earth
Hard row to hoe
They too will discover
That real waiting rainbow

All are God's children
Imagining what we wish
Thinking what we choose
Individuality all that matters

Fact will always remain
No matter what's believed
One controls only moments
Time moves on relentlessly



© Copyright 2001 Robert William Gruhn - All Rights Reserved
Carol Lina
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since 2001-11-18
Posts 94
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1 posted 2001-11-18 05:22 PM


hmmmmm I never thought of it, but individuality is really all that matters..and our words really show that don't they? Enjoyed this.

Carolina

Carol Lina
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since 2001-11-18
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2 posted 2001-11-18 05:22 PM


hmmmmm I never thought of it, but individuality is really all that matters..and our words really show that don't they? Enjoyed this.

Carolina

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
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3 posted 2001-11-18 07:09 PM


Very well put, Sir Robert. I love the vision this poem gave me. You have said it so very well.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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