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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-11-18 04:09 PM


Dedicated to some of my poet friends:

The phantom poet
strikes again
Here he goes
this time
writing on
bathroom walls
his love in rhyme
Celebrating
beauty
but avoiding eyes
Think again
dear phantom
words are stronger
than actions
Beware of your love
don't let dawn
come and find you
flirting with its shadow
among sleepless sparrows
vulnerable to love and passion


© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
Carol Lina
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since 2001-11-18
Posts 94
USA
1 posted 2001-11-18 04:11 PM


this is SO interesting. Have to think about this one a long time!

Carolina

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
2 posted 2001-11-18 04:13 PM


Very intriguing, walker.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)
3 posted 2001-11-18 06:06 PM


very good thoughts here I liked the read yuh

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 11-18-2001).]

Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
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4 posted 2001-11-18 06:46 PM


well done, Walker. Those phantom poets never have a ghost of a chance...
Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

5 posted 2001-11-18 07:32 PM


words are stronger
than actions
Beware of your love
don't let dawn
come and find you
flirting with its shadow

Interesting new write from you, walker.  These words especially are amazing.

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