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Forlorn |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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FORLORN My dreams are vanishing into the mist no longer take me to a magic land leaving behind thoughts of being kissed all pouring downward like the hourglass sand No longer to feel beauty in a sunset blind to brilliance of the color shown feeling the burden of untold dept of barren past that makes my soul groan Lonely spirit cries out for comfort only to feel emptiness inside begging that my time here be made short from the unending life tests I've tried No longer do I have the desire to get up from my many failures a darkness within put out the fire from this illness without an easy cure My arms stay open the truth revealed that love will never fill my embrace while the pains of the past stay unhealed and my tears flow freely down my face Karen Torbiak 2001© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
This is so sad  Your words make my heart ache for you.I pray that you will find love and feel love once more.Peaches |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is about as sad as sad can get, Karen. You've expressed much loneliness and pain. Well written, but very sad. I'm sending extra hugs to you today.  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes hard to believe in love until you see it face to face...James |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
that hurt such hurting such deep hurting arthur |
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Carol Lina Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 94USA |
the hurt is painfully obvious, but God, there is a beauty here! Carolina |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Such sadness and loneliness emits from each line, Karen. A wise person once taught me an important lesson on failure recently. She said that the difference between success and failure is that a person who succeeds tries again, the person who fails gives up for fear of failing. Hope in some way this helps! (((hugs))) All writing comes |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen...we let ourselve fall sometimes...and with courage...we again stand...with the feeling that we have won, once more, once again. If we fall and never stand, we wonder if we could, and too often we just lie there even more afraid to stand....for then our fear and doubts have won.... It is only the first inning....the game is far from over...Rise my Star and shine again. for the nighttime sky is clear and awaits your return. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Karen,what's wrong? I'm sorry you felt sad enough to write this. And it is a lovely poem, but so sad. Sandra PS I am sad too. Huggs [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 11-18-2001).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karen, so sorry you feel sad and lonely. No one should be. Love to you sweetie! Nancy. ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Thank you all so much for your wonderful words. You have no idea how much they have meant to me today. **hugs** to you all. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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