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Sunshine
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Wished Upon A Star

Wished upon a star
sudden void became so black
all for naught indeed


Inspired by:
Entreat A Dead Source


© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 11-18-2001 09:17 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Great response to a great piece of work...
Startime
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2 posted 11-18-2001 03:07 PM       View Profile for Startime   Email Startime   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Startime's Home Page   View IP for Startime

This poem is the perfect inspiration to his poem. You catch the sad feelings just right.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (edited 11-18-2001).]

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you capture the sad feelings perfectly.
Peaches
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indeed. . .

well done, you've captured the feelings here very well. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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Well said, perfect scene.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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Ok....am I the dense one....seems that everyone
else has this all figured out....

Guess what...ME too...nicely said in such
a short expression...
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Well, it's still November, so I guess I'm not TOO late with a THANKS to everyone for reading!
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aw this is neat, I like it! Im just sorry that im late replying to it!!!
 
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