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Melt Me (a senryu)

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rosepetals25
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Melt Me

How your love melts me
Passions rage inside our souls
Flowing like lava

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

© Copyright 2001 Tara Baldridge - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 11-18-2001 08:42 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


Smiling....
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2 posted 11-18-2001 12:56 PM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee


Ohhh, Tara, I like this!  
*ahem* have fun when you go to Texas    

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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Beautifully expressed Tara! Wonderfully visual!  

Best wishes,
/Kit
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4 posted 11-18-2001 01:01 PM       View Profile for peaches73533   Email peaches73533   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for peaches73533

Beautiful words and beautiful visualation.
Peaches
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This is a great form of poetry isn't it?
That lava made me sweat!  I needed that today!!

Carolina

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Mmmm doesnt it feel great to be melted by love just like m&m's?! Great write rosepetals

love,
rosepetal hehe
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7 posted 11-18-2001 04:29 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Beautiful, Tara.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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8 posted 11-18-2001 07:07 PM       View Profile for Startime   Email Startime   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Startime's Home Page   View IP for Startime

Sizzling....this is a beauty. I think he will melt for you too.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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Your words well expressed.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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Oh yes very passionate

I breathe the dust, the dust is me.

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melissa - don't worry. she will  
dear, as always, your gifts astound me.
-Dave
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Gee, could this be about you know who? LOL!  

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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Wow   I have to admit I'm surprised! I really didn't think I would get many replies for this one.. and I found 12!  I'm glad you all liked it   Thank you for your sweet replies Hugs to you all.

And of course, Dave, I love you

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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Add on more reply to your list... You seem to have expressed your feelings rather warmly as to say....I love this form of poetry..short but effective..

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat

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BEAUTIFUL!!!

Love it, love it.....

Charisma ~TMP~

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And lava is very hot when it flows...James
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i just melted  

Dennis

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Like is said, I never thought this one would get this many replies... It's strange isn't it?  The ones you really like never seem to do well and the ones you think will sink don't..*chuckles* Or is that just me? LOL. Thank you for reading and replying.. I'm glad you all enjoyed it


Tara


"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 11-20-2001).]

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19 posted 11-20-2001 09:54 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

beautiful!! you are a delight to read...


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Oh Tara!  This is HOT!!!  Hugs, Nancy!

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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You are melting all over these blue pages dear Tara.  
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Sounds like quite an eruption is on the horizon...
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and since you continue to amaze me with your skills, my dear *ah-HEM* bump  
-Dave
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I agree with dave...
BUMP   BUMP   BUMP
Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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