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Another Sunday Verse
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Another Sunday Verse |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Job 10 (1) “I loathe my life; I will give free utterance to my complaint; I will speak in the bitterness of my soul” He mumbled in constant meandering, Below the volume of understanding, Of the backache of lifting someone up, The thirsting he had while sharing a cup. He had only words and deeds to judge him. Shouting of evil to which he’d been cast Then handing a stranger a month bus pass, Moaning of the pains of his tired feet, He’d given away his shoes down the street. He would have the words and deeds to judge him. All of his coins had been given away Except for the harsh words he always say, Passersby would cringe from the dirty sight, Another dismal creature of the night. Gloom |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
It may not have been your intent? but I find myself smiling...what an excellent verse for a Monday....grin... and it fits right in with synchronicity as I just had a long discussion with my bro about Job....you make me smile, even when ya don't mean to....  |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Serenity Job is a man put on the Earth to teach a lesson By example, but few wish to learn it. Take my smile, I’m sure it would look better on you, Than this tired old face. Gloom |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I thank you for the offer, but I've my own tired old face to look at-- now write me dammit....I need some new Job material to throw at my brother, (this does tie in with karma, does it not?) love you my gloom |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
99.999% of the time, I am Job's opposite, but somehow, reading this, makes me feel better. Thank you... |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
And such wonderful lessons he taught us all....and you know what you have done an excellent job of teaching great lessons here in this poem as well. Very well done. I love it. And I am with serenity....it makes me smile. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
He would have the words and deeds to judge him. yes I believe this is true..even of you. I am glad to see others realizing the wonderful poet you are...finally. My best to you, always Professor G ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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