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Open Poetry #17

peace

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

0 posted 2001-11-18 05:28 AM

beyond my window
seascent floats on summer air -
white gulls cry freedom.

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2001-11-18 08:43 AM

Gulls sing Freedom's song
Sentinels from coast to coast
Worldwide echoes waft

Hope you don't mind inspiring me to respond poetically, m'friend... You always do that to me with your wonderful work...

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2001-11-18 11:34 AM

What a lovely visual Beki, beautifully done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2001-11-18 11:43 AM

Ha...........I want to see that!! Lovely Beki. Just lovely.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2001-11-18 12:15 PM

Send those Gulls around the globe
let them drop heavy loads of
Peace and Love
as they fly alongside
the Eagle and Dove.

(in lieu of their usual droppings)

Can you tell I liked your poem?

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

5 posted 2001-11-20 04:27 PM

Thanks everyone, I truly appreciate all your comments.

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