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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-11-18 03:25 AM


Too Many Rules


You tell me
I can't tell you
that I love you.

Do you
take me
for a fool?

That's one
too many
rule.


JamesLee
November18
2001

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Mon Cherie
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1 posted 2001-11-18 05:46 AM


Yes James! I do agree, that's only one rule, but that's one too many!! How could you suppress your feelings for someone you love? That's really too much, I guess. Love how you expressed this...
Startime
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2 posted 2001-11-18 12:33 PM


*sigh* how could anyone not want to be told they are loved. My heart goes out to you, dear one. Indeed that is one too many rules. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 2001-11-18 01:00 PM


James,
I agree.That's one too many rules.I would rather know that someone loves me than to think that no one loves me.
Peaches

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4 posted 2001-11-18 01:50 PM


She clearly isn't ready to hear it from you, maybe not from anyone.
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5 posted 2001-12-09 05:54 PM


Simple effective thoughts. I love this.

I am many.

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6 posted 2001-12-09 06:15 PM






(sad sigh) Oh James, my heart goes out to you! How can someone not want to hear how much they are loved by another! (sigh) I hope she can understand soon and return the love she desires for you! (sigh) So sad but well-written, sweet James! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton



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7 posted 2001-12-09 06:18 PM


I like to be reminded that I'm loved! James, you know you are loveable!!!!!

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8 posted 2001-12-09 06:22 PM


Right to the point James...Well said!
~hugs, Nancy~  

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Bill Charles
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9 posted 2001-12-09 06:58 PM


James - and that is, one too many rules.

BC

Madame Chipmunk
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10 posted 2001-12-09 08:37 PM


And a disgusting rule at that!
Very well said, James....
I think your rule should be to drop her.

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11 posted 2001-12-09 09:26 PM


James,

       That is an awfully disturbing rule.  It sounds like your lady has some issues to work out.... I wish you luck and patience.  Sometimes it is well worth the wait.

Hugs to you
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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