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will I ever see you, again?
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will I ever see you, again? |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Will one of us look away first before the other catches gaze will it all come back to us like the rush of a needle bearing opiate will we smile exchanging polite greetings will my heart soar and break all in the same moment will I ever see you, again? |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I can only say that I hope the glances you exchange are long lasting and that your heart receives the love you desire. Your words always touch the heart. A tender and gentle read for a late evening. Thank you for sharing this poem and these thoughts with me.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 11-18-2001).] |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
ouch! I could have written this it expressed my own feelings so well - thanks for sharing! |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Oh... It sure does hurt so much when you can only secretly look at the person you love from afar, and exchange common courtesies when you meet. It sure hurts. I've been through that before, and I hope you'll never have to hurt so much again. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Some very powerfully real feelings here... Thank you for sharing such a great expression that is so true. |
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Carol Lina Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 94USA |
very potent feelings here, sometimes it is better not to "see" someone again....sigh Carolina |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Very strong feelings here.i hope that one day you will have the love you deserve. Peaches |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Very intresting ponderings, Duncan. Enjoyed! All writing comes |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Hard to say the reaction one can have when confronted with a past love or potential love. But there is something that makes this poem so sexy, perhaps the unspoken words, the look, I don't know but I'm a fan of that situation of can't touch, can't look deal. So you know I love this one. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Feel the hope in here, well done. Sandra |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Know the feeling well, so ful of hope I breathe the dust, the dust is me. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
very deep question here, senor Duncan. I think we all wonder at some time.."How would I feel if I saw what's her name on the street again?" Would I still feel love for her? Regret that it ended? Relief that it ended? Euphoria that it ended? Who can say?  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Will one of us look away first before the other catches gaze ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Duncan, you see I look at this and wonder what happened, and, why either one of you would want to look away quickly before the other sees. I am still laughing at Balladeer's response. Euphoria that it ended! LOL. Great write here Duncan leaving me with lots to ponder tonight. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Duncan, your emotions are so strong here... I FELT this one...perhaps because I could relate to it in so many ways, this is a fine fine write, and brought a smile to my face, and a few tears to my eyes. Thank you sweet friend.I pray that you do see each other again, and that when you do...it's a moment of happiness. Take care. Amy "Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
An awkward moment at the very least. Will the corner glance re-kindle old romance? Or make you wonder why it ended? |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
I just (attempted) to write a poem about this very feeling.....yeah, I know about this feeling. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I only have a couple people I feel this way about....but feel it I do....this is a great write Duncan [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 12-18-2001).] |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Until that moment comes...one never knows. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Duncan, this is sooooooo beautiful, I too wish you eternal happiness to your tender loving heart! (sigh) May you forever gaze into loves eyes ever after with joy! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Realistic imagry depicted here. Those moments have such an impact and you put it on the page with such a vivid punch. I relly like this. |
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