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The Unripe Words
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The Unripe Words |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
as you feast on passion's feed restrain this your writer’s greed take those words upon this page hie them to thee for an age words that simmer ere are tossed meanings within now seem lost what purpose serves your poetry pulled unripened from the tree do not hasten your words in rhyme pluck them not from poet’s vine watch them ripen in passion’s sun post them not til they are done *special thanks to serenity for the phrase that started this poem. I had no idea where it was going or what it would be like when it got there! [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 11-18-2001).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
this is truly inspiring I cannot tell a lie it is inspiring makes me think when I want to post three a day of fluff and get so sad hearing things like "Walt this can't be you its too good!" What does it all matter I ask myself isn't poetry supposed to be for me? |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!Well it sure went there alright...very well said. I am glad that she got you started with this one.  a great read and message too. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Poet deVine, I like this verse three was my favorite.. especially the first two lines.. "do not hasten your words in rhyme pluck them not from poet’s vine..."  Very cool Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ah...but you know me and forbidden fruit..... (crunch, crunch, crunch....yum...)  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
... yep - It takes me anywhere from two days to two weeks to finish a poem... um.. wait a minute - I've got one that I started two years ago that isn't done yet... I'll post it... soon... I like this PdV..Nice work..  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
well done. . . the meter is excellent, and the words flow freely. . . and of course, I'm not surprised to see serenity's name tied into this. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Poet, very well versed, wonderful flow. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Very well written. Peaches |
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