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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2001-11-17 11:22 PM

typing wishing
angel wings
not even touch
just breeze nearby
weeping prayer
aloud I sing
to hear refrain of angel's sigh...

Redemption?
Even I must laugh
I wish for spark
in watered ash.
Grace
cannot be bought nor prayed
nor granted by sorrows displayed.
Even request for "just" a sign
is a revolt against DIVINE---
for everyday, the Passion Play
is enacted in my mind...

a miracle each blessed day--
and I am blind--was born this way...
Armegeddon in flesh flayed
(make my desire go away)
Still this chaos in my life
and spare me such eternal strife.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-11-17 11:41 PM

Oh my gosh....you hit me on a night when I can truly relate to this poem. BRAVO!!! I too ache inside. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

2 posted 2001-11-18 05:24 AM

Fanned cool by feathers
Angel wind or demon leather,
What price the breeze?

Spoken to too loud
Singular or in a boorish crowd
What price the words?

Passion of the flesh
Gentle or in massive harsh crush
What price the touch?

Taken for a fool
Comedy or a single use tool
What price the joke?

Forgotten in the wake,
Casual or a by design make
What price the thought?

Gloom
inspirational writing

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2001-11-18 06:11 PM

Oh yes, I can understand this well. Hurts, to feel like this. What do you do? How to make it better. I wish knew that.
Sandra

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-11-18 06:16 PM

This one aches, serenity. Great expression!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

5 posted 2001-11-19 12:36 PM

serenity,

Powerful write... I felt this one so clearly.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

6 posted 2001-11-19 01:28 AM

Ache not into tomorrow.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

7 posted 2001-11-19 01:45 AM

This is a powerful and heartwrenching write.May you ache no more.
Peaches

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

8 posted 2001-11-19 03:14 AM

I would like to thank everyone...and would like to add the disclaimer that I am not physically blind---it was a metaphor for my confusion at this time. Most of you already know that---smile---but sometimes I confuse myself. Thanks to all--with Love and hugs.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2001-11-19 10:28 AM

enjoy

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