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Wanting
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Wanting Wanting arms to hold me close wrapped in warm embrace Holding tight beneath your heart in such loving place Wanting lips so soft and strong gently touching mine Sighing as tongues dance sweetly tasting love’s pure wine Wanting fingers with soft touch, tracing eyes and face Stroking tender skin laid bare, heart begins to race Wanting one to hold me right with open heart’s desire Wild and burning from each touch setting souls on fire Wanting heart to share with me, dreams of worlds unseen Come fly with me among stars a King to this Queen Karen Torbiak 2001© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Truly a poem of beautiful desire...well done, Karen. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Star...do we need to call 911 and get a fire truck over to where you live....or maybe a big handsome fireman to help put a fire out....NICE write...very nice write.... |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Left this man's royal blood boiling!! 911 may not be enough ... sounds like a job for something a bit more special. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hi Karen...meet Karen...and this reminded me of "The Way We Were Were"----there is a line in the film where "Hubble" (Robert Redford" asks the "Babs" "What do you want?" and her answer? "I want----I want----I WANT." Smiles to you. You've a lovely name by the way, LOL. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karen! Oh my...figures I pick this one to read just before bed!! LOL...nice writing! Great timing!! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
You write so beautifully. I wish I could write like you. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Now this is exactly what I want also. Great write, Karen.  All writing comes |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hope you get what you want...James |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
very sweet and romantic, nicely said |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Wanting lips so soft and strong gently touching mine Sighing as tongues dance sweetly tasting love’s pure wine I love this so much!! The flow, the feel... You can write so well!! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Karen, Ohhh so beautiful This is definately one of my favorites from you  This is what I want to... To feel my loves arms around me holding me tight *sighs* Very well done Greatly muchly enjoyed.Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Karen seems like the general opinion of the women here, is the same as yours,and I have to agree. You said it so well, too. Wonderful writing, better than ever I think. Sandra |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
startime, this is so sensual and lovely! |
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