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aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2001-11-17 06:53 PM

I am a window,
opened to you;
and the curtain,
softly touched you;
A tissue, a hand
that weeps you
when you cry.
And when you call on me,
I answer.
I am plant, and you’re my fountain.
I depend on you,
and needed you.
We are like day and night,
sun and moon,
walk by side by side.
I came to life because of you.
And for that I’m forever thankful.
And the sky is the witness of our love,
prove of our faith.
Together we have tasted to the sour and the sweet.
And never I want to be without you again.
We have been through the challenge of death.
And to this day we are still together.

I am a window,
opened to you;
and the curtain,
softly touched you.
Touched, so that you may not change
But comfort within your skin;
Touched, so that say over to sadness,
And spill the joy of your heart all over your face.
Touched, so we may help each other grow.
Songs of our love will go down to history...

Tell me that you feel the same way as I do,
That you want to hold me forever and ever;
And through the time your love won’t ever change.
And we will be happy forever,
never get bored with each other,
never run out of things to say.

I am a window,
opened to you;
and you’re the sunshine,
shine through my heart.
Your shine is so bright
that I cannot hide from you;
So bright that I always fill warm within you.
And I will live for you forever and ever...

Lizzy http://poets2000.com/lizzyvivian/

~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all.
~Blessed are those who find ordinary things extraordinary.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-11-17 06:58 PM

Lovely work here. The images were beautiful.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-11-17 07:07 PM

I am a window,
opened to you;
and the curtain,
softly touched you.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Lizzy, this is just beautiful!
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2001-11-17 09:50 PM

Yes, love can be so good. It takes work to keep it alive and wonderful but it is worth every effort. Wonderful writing. I really enjoyed this poem.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2001-11-19 02:43 PM

Enjoyed your thoughts on love...James

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

5 posted 2001-11-19 02:54 PM

These thoughts on love are beautiful.
Peaches

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

6 posted 2001-11-19 03:19 PM

Thanks all. It was a song for a novel I'm writing

I got a question: What else beside 'smile' can be put in colons to make a face? I can only make a smile. And I don't know where to look it up. I clicked on UBB Code is On and it wasn't a link.

~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all.
~Blessed are those who find ordinary things extraordinary.

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

7 posted 2001-11-19 04:50 PM

try ( : ) and ( heart ) and a ( : ) to make a

a ( : ) and ( clapping ) and a ( : ) to get

and a ( : ) with ( crying ) and ( : ) to form

These should work for you.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2001-11-19 05:23 PM

yes,sometimes,love can be so good

enjoyed

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

9 posted 2001-11-19 06:56 PM

thanks ctowen!

Lizzy

~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all.
~Blessed are those who find ordinary things extraordinary.

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

10 posted 2001-11-19 08:01 PM

Lovely images of love and longing Lizzy.
Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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