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Saunni
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0 posted 2001-11-17 03:06 PM



The Sound Of Letting Go

I will take from me this moon that I've been fortunate to hold
And, hand it to the man who's heart stands as brightly as it's light does
I know he's probably held almost everything in his loving arms
But, hopefully this gift will be something he's never touched...

I think when one receives the all mighty beams of gold that hangs in the sky
And, when we become one with what's bigger and always has been
Then, we can respect a little more of what the world really has
For, this gift is eternal and it has no end...

With taking my treasure and placing it into another's hand
Shows there's this part of me so grateful for his genuine ways
Oh, the sound of letting go can be music to the ears and the soul
So, listen closely and you'll hear my thankfulness today...

He deserves that moon because his heart's much the same
They both shine endlessly all over this world
He glows like the moon only he glows lower than the sky
But, he has just the same effect on this lonely girl...

He's taken the side of me that has only known fear all my life
And, is gently lying me down to a whole new kind of peace
I cannot always find the words that dance here inside of me
But, I found the strength to thank God that he was within my reach...

So, now my days find me fighting what replays over and over in my mind
But, my lifetime friend is there as close as he can be
He's taking the heartbreak and sadness I've carried for many years
And, teaching me kindness is surely the most precious release...

I can in some ways see a little brighter now
He's given me a brand new method to hope
So, little by little, I'll become what God intended me to be
Blessed is this man that's allowing me the sound of letting go...

Someday I'm gonna dance along the waters that run out there
And, I'm gonna sing the melody of life without all the tears
Not even the winds will be able to cause this candle of life to go out
Cause this man's showing me quickly what trust is all about...

Yes, I hold a past no girl or boy should ever know
But, this man's helping me now hear the sound of letting go
To you, My Friend, I'm living just to hear that tune
So, My Friend, just promise me you'll never forget the moon...
*Sauni*


Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

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Sven
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1 posted 2001-11-17 06:31 PM


here's hoping that they never will forget. . .  

wonderful my friend. . . you write your heart so well. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Carol Lina
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2 posted 2001-11-18 04:18 PM


This is maddening in it's loveliness!!!!!!!!

Carolina

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