Two Hearts Smiling, A Joyful Ride

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Open Poetry #17

Two Hearts Smiling, A Joyful Ride

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2001-11-17 02:55 PM

Together into the winds of love
Two ride as one upon a lover’s steed
Guided only by the stars above
Filling within each their every need.

Two souls journey down a path sure
as their racing hearts pound and endure
Those moments shared as each sighed
while away into the heavens they ride.

Lost upon a moment of erotic bliss
taking from each with a long kiss.
Keeping time  to a love making tune
making a woman soulfully swoon.

And as they settle in the other’s arms
still dreaming of sighs and charms
Eyes closing into a restful sleep
Till once again two lover’s reap.

Whewwwwwww,  what a day....

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-11-17 03:02 PM

WoW!!! Magnus! Are you not plum tuckered out yet? Is the birthday girl tired at all?
Loved this one...I sure did!!
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2001-11-17 03:10 PM

NOPE...she isn't...and I am holding my own.
getting ready to go have dinner and movie..
Her day...I want her to remember this one
for a very long time...

thanx Nancy.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2001-11-17 04:50 PM

Wow,this is better than ever, and I like all of your poems. It sounds like a very happy day, good for you to want her to have a memorable day. I'm sure you have succeeded.
Sandra

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-11-17 05:55 PM

This was wonderfully written, Magnus. Sounds like you are both having a great day.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

5 posted 2001-11-17 08:59 PM

*giggling* sounds like your day is a huge success. Very well done, Magnus.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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