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Lonely Shadow
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since 2000-03-14
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Virginia

0 posted 2001-11-17 12:09 PM


Angel wings
Gentle as the morning dew
Touching my empty heart
Once cold and hardened
By the winter snow
Now brimming, overflowing
With warmth and happiness

I look into your loving eyes
Not a word spoken, with my eyes
I ask how can this be so
With only your  gentle smile
Your voice echoing in my mind
"because you are and
will always be my friend"

searching within my very soul
How can I, a lowly creature
Be worthy of such a wondrous gift
This loving woman who must see
Something beyond the darkness
who loves the man I am inside
rather than what can only be seen

If it were in my power
I would pluck the brightest star
From the heavens above
And give this gift  to you
with a string of gold
I would hang it from your neck
to keep it next to your loving heart

for you are a bright star
shining in my night sky
giving this lowly poet hope
where none was before
so I thank the lord above
For bringing you into my life
An angel sent from heaven
A true friend, always

Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death.

© Copyright 2001 Lonely Shadow - All Rights Reserved
Mon Cherie
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1 posted 2001-11-17 12:14 PM


This poem expresses the full meaning of the phrase "that's what friends are for".  

Being a good friend, she hasn't given up hope on you, and you shouldn't think yourself to be a lowly poet, coz you're not!  

Really enjoyed it!

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
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2 posted 2001-11-17 12:17 PM


What a beautiful tribute to one who has brought this light into your life and heart Lonely Shadow. Wonderfully tender sentiments ... just lovely!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2001-11-17 12:18 PM


This is beautiful Lonely Shadow!
May she always be near to inspire you my friend.  
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
4 posted 2001-11-17 12:32 PM


A beautiful gift for a friend who sees into your heart. Very well done.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
5 posted 2001-11-17 07:08 PM


True friends make life worthwhile always.  Lovely work!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida
6 posted 2001-11-17 07:29 PM


Beautiful expression of love.
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