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Lonely Shadow
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since 2000-03-14
Posts 128
Virginia

0 posted 2001-11-17 12:09 PM


gentle smile upon my face
As I sense your velvet touch
Electricity flowing through my body
As I look into your sapphire eyes
Praying  that you will not see
the dreams, the feelings I hold
true as your loving heart
how I long to hold you in my arms
to touch your lips with mine
all of the nights I have spent
my thoughts dwelling upon you
envying the man who holds your heart
a sigh escaping my lips
wishing I could know such splendor
so here I stand before you
trying to hide what is felt within
the love and adoration
for a beautiful angel
a woman whose beauty
is only surpassed by her heart
gentle and kind, loving and pure
if you could only see
the wonders I see in you
may my dream become reality
For I cannot keep such secrets hidden
For love cannot be held at bay forever
It would break its binds and be made known
Then the world would know my love for you
And the age old question shall return
"could you ever love me back?"

Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death.

© Copyright 2001 Lonely Shadow - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2001-11-17 12:24 PM


Shadow~Isn't it worth the risk of telling her?  Perhaps she feels the same.  Oh! BTW...this is very well done!  
Enjoyed, Nancy.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
2 posted 2001-11-17 12:24 PM


*sigh* how could she not love you back when words such as this flow from your heart to your pen. Very beautiful writing. I lost myself in the tenderness of it.   Good luck. I hope you receive the lady you desire.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
3 posted 2001-12-03 09:18 PM


How did I miss this one? This is beautifully sweet. enjoyed.  

Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since

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