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Wings Of Love |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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in the pale moonlight in the sunrise or the darkest night you've come to stay by my side and share your dreams with me. I left home to seek a future for my destiny and out there I found you and me searchin through a world of time. Chorus: you were young and you were free you got deep inside of me and you sailed upon my heart with wings of love you were lonely you had needs and you saw your place in me and you sailed upon my heart with wings of love. as the days pass by I nest your wings upon my heart's desire to keep you right here by my side where we can share our dreams. Chorus: you were young and you were free you got deep inside of me and you sailed upon my heart with wings of love you were lonely you had needs and you saw your place in me and you sailed upon my heart with wings of love. The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethome, A lovely song and I heard it quite clearly. |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
The lyrics to this song is beautiful.  wonder how the tune sounds like. [This message has been edited by Mon Cherie (edited 11-17-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Magically beautiful. You sing love so softly in this that I wept from the tenderness of it. Very well done, Eric.  I love it.Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful....love it!!! Charisma ~TMP~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Eric! Love it! Do you have the music for it? ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful song, ethome. All writing comes |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
A lovely song played to the tune of your heart. Do or die! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you always sing it well my friend. . . great job. . . ---------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I guess it would be too much to ask for the chords too? (Sheet music is not necessary--I ain't that good) Beautiful song my friend, and I have missed your tunes! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sigh...when are you gonna sing one just for me sweet poet man? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Paula, thank you for bringing this one up front, I had missed it somehow. Eric, this is really beautiful! My favorite part: "in the pale moonlight in the sunrise or the darkest night you've come to stay by my side and share your dreams with me." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eric--you write the best lyrics..for just reading them, I can hear the music. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Beautiful song, I can hear it playing. Peaches |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I love the feel that goes with this. What a lovely song |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
you sailed upon my heart with wings"" of hope.... I adore this, it is lovely and so full of emotion.....thank you... Greeneyes~ [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-28-2001).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
you know what... you are a unique lyricist... really great... enjoyed this one too, my friend... regards, sudhir |
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