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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-11-17 10:05 AM


She Did It

she axed me with
an oxymoron

I crumbled in
the conundrum

tiddled in the
riddle

oxed of me and found

an ox in my moron
drumming through the night

with an oxyundrom
swaying in delight

© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2001-11-17 10:13 AM


Sunshine,
A cute play on words, enjoyed *L*

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2 posted 2001-11-17 08:48 PM


I'm just beside myself!!  

well done. . . loved the play with the words. . .

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3 posted 2001-11-17 08:55 PM


*giggling*Oh gosh it sure looks like she did. This is a hoot. I love it.    

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4 posted 2001-11-17 08:58 PM


Cool write Karilea!  ~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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5 posted 2001-11-17 10:12 PM


There's an ox in your moron? *looks around to find her ox is missing* Oh! THERE he is. Sorry for your trouble, Karilea, would you please send my ox back to me?  

God bless America, my home sweet home.

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6 posted 2001-11-17 10:49 PM


Is your moron an ox with moxie? Or just an oxcident of nature? A pox on that ox and I will say no moron this subject!!  
Nan
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7 posted 2001-11-18 02:12 PM


You
Don't play fair
I'm trying (very trying)
To get my house clean here..

I've got company
Coming this week...
Giving Thanks

and..
um...

I oxidentally
Did a moronic thingy...

I wrote
The wrong poem
For the challenge

Now
I've gotta start over

and....
um...

It's quite an oxymundrum...


[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 11-18-2001).]

peaches73533
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8 posted 2001-11-18 02:41 PM


Love the way you played with words here.
Peaches

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9 posted 2001-11-18 02:44 PM


My ox is a moron too.
His name is Wizz-dum.
....or should it be wise-dumb?

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (edited 11-18-2001).]

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