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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-11-17 09:10 AM


When Time Stands Still

There is no crime within
And time is not a sin.
The mirror shows her view
Of lovely old and true.

For change continues change
Although it seems quite strange
My eyes still see a bride
With smiles of youth inside

I do not see the mirrored view
For what I see is young and true.
This is the beauty of my goal
This is the beauty stays my soul

And ever flows eternity
And will to me forever be.
It’s fixed inside a minds begin
And stays all time for it’s within.

I’m sure she sees a similar view
Prince charming that her heart first knew.


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Poet deVine
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1 posted 2001-11-17 09:50 AM


This truly brought a smile to my face Sy. A love poem for anyone of any age. And I'm sure she does see you as her Prince Charming...after all, to us here, you are a Prince of a Poet and oh my! You ARE charming!    
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2 posted 2001-11-17 09:51 AM



should every bride be seen by groom
in love's light, then there's room
for them to grow old, side by side
in love's light, groom holds his bride

Janet Marie
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3 posted 2001-11-17 11:33 AM


There is no crime within
And time is not a sin.

============================

For change continues change
Although it seems quite strange
=================================
This is the beauty of my goal
This is the beauty stays my soul

And ever flows eternity
And will to me forever be.
It’s fixed inside a minds begin
And stays all time for it’s within.


I’m sure she sees a similar view
Prince charming that her heart first knew.
=======================================
this is precious Sy ... and youre anologies of time are so darn cool!!!

"mirror mirror on the wall"
who's the SMOOOOTHEST Stinky poet of them all  

YOU are the
Prince of Poetry...
KING of COOL
Emperor of Epopee
Monarch of melodics
Royal of romance
Raja of rhyme
Ceasar of cadence
Vicar of verse
Midas of meter
Czar of couplets

and last but never least ... me Stinky of the Winkies  

Ice covers my soul
spirit frozen--heart cold
Still so much about me is raw
So I search for a place to thaw
~
Constant craving has always been

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2001-11-17 12:13 PM


This is truly inspirational Sy!
I do believe that as years go by the one we are deeply in love with still sees us as forever young and beautiful...or handsome, whichever the case may be.
Well done.
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Kit McCallum
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5 posted 2001-11-17 12:35 PM


"This is the beauty of my goal
This is the beauty stays my soul"

I'm echoing all these wonderful comments above, and adding my thanks for such a tender and beautiful read Seymour. What a lovely and flowing tribute to the one you love ... a heart warming read indeed.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Startime
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6 posted 2001-11-17 12:45 PM


*sigh* I am sure she see that way too. This is so beautiful. It tells of true love that stays true through all the years. BRAVO!!! A   from me because the love you have for yourwife is so beautiful to see.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
7 posted 2001-11-17 01:00 PM




Wonderful and so eloquently said...

I loved it.

Thank you
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Lone Wolf
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8 posted 2001-11-17 07:06 PM


Lovely Seymour.  We always see them as they were when we forst fell in love with them.  To us, the view remains eternal.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

walker
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9 posted 2001-11-17 07:22 PM


Really beautiful.
Martie
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10 posted 2001-11-17 07:31 PM


Sy..so tenderly written...love makes all things beautiful..I think it's a good thing!
serenity blaze
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11 posted 2001-11-17 10:34 PM


Smiling and "sying"--this reminded me of an old dear friend, who told me, regarding time, that if you look at the clock in its circular motion, the only place time stands still is in the center---just wish I could get off the fast-paced second hand! Hugs you, my gentle poet! (and I know, I think too much sometimes...)
ctowen
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12 posted 2001-11-17 10:54 PM


Astounding write!!
Simply timeless ...
Serenity's comment on time
is well spread ...
time is endless, but stands still
for those which are centered!
Great job!!

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2001-11-18 11:07 AM


Poet deVine,
Thank you sweet lady and you are a favourite of mine. *L*

Sunshine,
Wonderful response thank you. *L*

JM,
You overwhelm me sometimes. Love Sy

Nancy,
Thank you sweet. *L*

Kit,
And a heart warming thanks to you. *L*

Startime,
Thank you for the bravo. *L*

Enchanted,
Thank you for the eloquent. *L*

Lone Wolf,
Nice comment thank you.

Walker,
Thanks for the beautiful.

Martie,
Yes it is and thank you. *L*

Serenity,
Good thinking, thank you. *L*

Ctowen,
Wonderful response, thank you.

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