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That Waking Moment
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That Waking Moment |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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That Waking Moment Touched by more than just the morning sun's ray and dreams wove by magical spirits spun, brilliance lustfully bathes the light of day, nights devoted sleep comes to rest and done. Your eyes still lay closed, but your heart awakes. I feel it tremble laying beside me, drawing my breath away as yours intakes. Two into one, as our souls ought to be. At this, the waking moment, I believe that all we share in life will never die. A joyous moment easy to conceive, never to wonder nor have tears to cry. Touched by more than the morning sun's ray brilliance lustfully bathes the light of the day. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
OK How do I make those litte icons clap?? This is awesome,and may other adjectives I can't come up with so early. I love this, you captured the moment perfectly. Sandra |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
This is such a wonderful piece of poem!! I really love it! I guess it is wonderfully romantic to wake up next to the person you love so deeply. That sense of never-ending security, the feeling that things between you will never ever change. It is so sweet! (OK.. juz realised my vocab is rather limited, eh?  ) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
This beautiful sonnet is romantic perfection. Very well done, Craig. I love love sonnets and you do them very well.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this is so lovely, and such passion....so early in the AM....awake the day like this always.... Greeneyes~ [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-17-2001).] |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Your eyes still lay closed, but your heart awakes. I feel it tremble laying beside me, drawing my breath away as yours intakes. Two into one, as our souls ought to be. ---------------- Indeed..."Touched by more than the morning sun's ray"... ~Sigh~ So so tenderly beautiful... I loved it.... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Craig! I LOVE THIS ONE!!! Thank you...hugs, Nancy. ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Ah, that what I would say good write of a love poem, at least better all mine. Thanks for sharing. I don't know how to make a smile face in message either. But this *Hugs* Lizzy http://poets2000.com/lizzyvivian/ ~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all. ~Blessed are those who find ordinary things extraordinary. [This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (edited 11-17-2001).] |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Sandra So you are not a morning person? Neither am I usually!! Thank you for the awesome comment! * please see note at bottom of reply * Mon Cherie Limited or not, thank you for your comments. They were "deeply" and "wonderfully" sweet!!  Karen Not sure of perfection but it sure did feel right. Thank you. Greeneyes Thank you, my internal clock holds no time It would be nice to wake to such, wouldn't it... I wish the same for you! Enchanted I am so glad you felt its touch! Thank you! Nancy NANCY!!! THANK YOU!!! xx/oo  Lizzy Thanks for the hug and comment... much appreciated!! * please see note at bottom of reply * * note * to use smilies - when making reply go to bottom of page to where it says "Quick view" click on "smilies" for each smiley just type what is beside it. Keep Smiling!! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Beautiful and romantic write. Much enjoyed! All writing comes |
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