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Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

0 posted 2001-11-17 02:22 AM

There are no steel bars
except in my mind
or is it my heart

imprisonment
is not so easily defined
upon
this postcard.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2001-11-17 02:41 AM

Love can steal
those steel bars,
and rip them right off,
unlocking your heart.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

2 posted 2001-11-17 10:07 AM

I love this one. I wrote something similar yesterday( how weird)

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2001-11-17 10:12 PM

Love has a tendency to melt bars with the heat it can generate. **hugs** don't keep your heart locked behind steel bars, my friend, you have too much to share.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Carol Lina
Member

since 2001-11-18

Posts 94
USA

4 posted 2001-11-18 04:24 PM

ah, yes, imprisonment cannot be shown on a postcard....it must be "enveloped" and then ripped apart with the strength of steel that comes from writing when you stand and say to yourself.....I will never put down my pen!

just a little philosophy for what it's worth

Carolina

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-11-18 05:04 PM

for steel bars do not a prison make. . .

well done my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

6 posted 2001-11-18 08:34 PM

Read and reread this, felt it Duncan. Succinct and cold, and so alone, I sigh. *Peace.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

7 posted 2001-11-19 11:00 PM

I'm a bit late getting this postcard...do you need a get out of jail free card?? I may have one or two kicking around

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Dennis
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 235
Indiana

8 posted 2001-11-20 08:27 PM

man, i feel trapped too, i could have written this, not as well, but i could have!

Dennis

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2001-11-21 03:42 PM

Ah, you must not let the bars hold you back. They can always bend. Or maybe you need a cake with a file baked in??
Sandra

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

10 posted 2001-11-21 07:56 PM

Free spirits
are not easily captured
slip through
& fly...

loved this...

~Tier

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2001-11-21 08:47 PM

Oh Duncan, this one likes me!! Thankyou, Nancy.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

12 posted 2001-11-21 08:59 PM

Unlock these bars over me
Give me freedom, set me free
Let my heart blood flow well
as my soul departs this cell

Excellent write Duncan..short but right
on point.

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

13 posted 2001-11-21 10:07 PM

Love can magically dissolve those bars.
Peaches

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