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Lucie’s on the Run

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Lucie’s on the Run
By Larry Chadwick

Lucy has been struck with fear,
She’s runnin’ from the Balladeer.
All she did was watch a fight,
Now she’s hidin’ just from fright.

I hope she comes up with a plan,
‘Cause she’s runnin’ from a man.
Probably she has no place to go,
That the deer doesn’t already know.

Comical it is to me just the same,
To see Lucie without her game.
But if she know what’s for the best,
She’ll get a man to help her with the test.

So this whole thing is looking serious,
Lucie is alread sounding quite deliriuos.
But I suppose the deer will let her off the hook,
Even though I’d like to see him throw the book.

Afterall, this jousting thing is just for sport,
Lucie is really begging for the deers retort.
Balladeer she is really pleading for a fight,
So do her a favor and start it yet tonight.

[This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 11-17-2001).]

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1 posted 11-17-2001 01:03 AM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

Lucie said, and I quote:

"Sweet Balladeer I must admit I was always on your side.
(But now that he is done with Kev, I better run and hide.)
Your the best, a genius, no smarter man around!
(I better find a place thats far so I can not be found.)
The way you took that youngster on, and so quickly you were through.
(I am gettin nervous now, don't know what he could do.)
My Balladeer, He will win! I told that Midnitesun!
(I just know he'll find me though, there's nowhere I can run.)
I saw them placin' bets yanno, I said they should have stopped.
(I never should have bet on Kev. My whole paycheck got dropped.)
I knew you'd be the Champion, the ruler of that ring!
(I knew I never shoulda said that kiss my hiney thing!)"

[This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 11-17-2001).]

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2 posted 11-17-2001 01:16 AM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

LOL, trying to stir up another rumble? or just put it back into overdrive?  
Lucie's gonna tan your hide, you know that don't you? And I'm brave. I'll still stand behind Kev. (Notice where I said I'd stand?)
LOL. This is better than any TV shows, except West Wing.  

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3 posted 11-17-2001 01:19 AM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

Midnitesun,
I'm the oldest of three boys and by far the smallest. But I was always the toughest. I got a longer arm span. That reach always came in handy. Did you say trouble?
  

p.s. go check out the Lucy thread by Irish Rose again.

[This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 11-17-2001).]

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4 posted 11-17-2001 01:53 AM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Duncan

I'm reading in the wrong order...so I'm (only) half lost here.  But knowing a bit of this history, think I know what's up.
I applaud you, Larry.  Notice how the tough ones always run first.  
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5 posted 11-17-2001 01:57 AM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

Duncan,
You're absolutely right. I was impressed how long you waited to run in that kissing line!  

[This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 11-19-2001).]

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i've been away for a week, and look at all the fun I missed!!!! (glad the stuff's all here for me to catch up on)

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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7 posted 11-19-2001 10:48 PM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

Tracey,
Glad you're geting caught up. The fun never stops you know!   Time for a Lucie from me I think.
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8 posted 11-19-2001 11:21 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Believe me, Larry, Lucie doesn't run from any man.
She's hiding out there somewhere hatching out some evil plan.
I've seen that gal in action...watched poetic bodies fall
Whenever Lucie gets the urge to hit them with her all.
She's setting me up for the kill, pretending to show fear
While working on some evil plot to get old Balladeer.
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9 posted 11-19-2001 11:30 PM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

Balladeer,
It seems it has become a gender war,
Lucie is giving all the men what for.
But we are men who are strong and brave,
And will occasionally come out of our cave.
So now it seems like more of a waiting game,
Seeing which victim that next she will name.
It could be Balladeer or maybe even Larry,
But I'm inclined to think it won't be Mary.

See, aren't we patient?  
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how did i miss this one? sorry im so late reading this. You are most clever Larry!!
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11 posted 02-11-2002 06:41 PM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

Joanna,
Just havin' fun. Never grew up you know. Thanks.
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