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Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2001-11-16 10:30 PM

Dance With Me To Love

You waltz to me in whispers
of soothing serenade,
your eyes, they leap with Luna
to mesh in flecks of jade,
I know that God exists
He twinkles in your eyes,
eternal rapture lives
it found me by surprise,
I finally opened up my soul
and cleared the path to see,
I now embrace the fated truth
that we were meant to be,
angels captivate my ears
through your voice of song,
their laughs choreograph
where you and I belong,
tick of time surceases
when your spirit sings,
this is the perfect romance
it gives my heartbeat wings

Take me to tranquility
to tango in your touch,
surge my skin with passion's urge
of bond I crave so much,
set the sun for evening sway,
rock me in your arms,
penetrate my dreams, so soft
into my sacred charms,
infuse me with your inner drum,
spark me with your splendor,
overflow into my sighs,
drink of my surrender,
move within my melody,
stride within sensation,
grace my place of lace,
explore my exaltation,
paint your smile upon my lips
to tremble with your kindred kiss,
then, dance with me to love, so true
beyond the realm of bliss

By Melissa P. Monette

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-11-16 10:33 PM

once again, the Queen of Romance serenades us with yet another wonderful work. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

2 posted 2001-11-16 10:41 PM

Is that all you can think about....sax, sax, sax?????

It's very nice, Melissa

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2001-11-16 11:36 PM

You waltz to me in whispers
of soothing serenade,
your eyes, they leap with Luna
to mesh in flecks of jade,
I know that God exists
He twinkles in your eyes,
eternal rapture lives
it found me by surprise,
I finally opened up my soul
and cleared the path to see,
I now embrace the fated truth
that we were meant to be,
=================================

this just radiates the passionate soul-mate kind of love we all dream of...
and your gift of cadence and melodics adds to the enchantment.
beautiful melis

Ice covers my soul
spirit frozen--heart cold
Still so much about me is raw
So I search for a place to thaw
~
Constant craving has always been

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

4 posted 2001-11-16 11:48 PM

Ah, melissa you have once more orchestrated a romantic poem as the "maestro of love" that you are! hugs, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2001-11-16 11:49 PM

I was going to be so serious too Melissa honest I was, until that skaliwag put his two sax worth in! This was absolutely dreamy and romantic, and yes, very saxy too

Lovely!

~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

6 posted 2001-11-17 12:12 PM

A dream we can all relate to Melissa, our soul's music, our soul's love *sigh*.
Beautifully penned and visually..
Take a bow girl!!!!

Isis

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

7 posted 2001-11-17 12:59 PM

Melissa,

So beautiful.. you words flow and move with a life of their own.

Wonderful.

Hugs,
Tara
And I have to say.. LMAO@Balladeers reply!

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

8 posted 2001-11-17 08:58 AM

A looooong ~Sigh~.....

Wow...Melissa...this is so so softly and tenderly beautiful. You've captivated my heart with this one....would you set it free please?..

An absolutely charming wonderful piece....that has sung right to my heart.

Thank you dearest...

{{{Hugs}}}
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2001-11-17 04:57 PM

How beautiful, what a wonderful dance you have going here.
May it last forever.
Sandra

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2001-11-17 05:51 PM

Melissa...this is just breathtakingly beautiful. I love the music too, and only wish you had mentioned the name of it...I am a music nut, and although have heard this piece many times cannot put my finger on the name or where I have heard it.
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Chelsea~
Member

since 2001-02-09

Posts 260
Ontario, CANADA

11 posted 2001-11-18 02:21 PM

missy, I am so glad
i came across this!
it's so beautiful!,
you always write
romance well

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

12 posted 2001-11-18 02:30 PM

Missy,
Your words,music,and pictures have left a melancholy note upon my heart.great job.
Peaches

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2001-11-18 02:32 PM

"Dance with me to love."
Enjoyed this...James

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

14 posted 2001-11-18 04:39 PM

*sigh* how absolutely wonderful. This poem sent me on a romantic vision that felt incredible. Just what I needed. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (edited 11-18-2001).]

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

15 posted 2001-11-18 08:39 PM

Melissa,
Such tender words of Love flow from your pen, heartfelt words that soothe the soul with the message "LOVE LIVES"! Thanks for sharing this masterpiece, Peace, Dennis :^)

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

16 posted 2001-11-19 01:26 AM

Fantastic! Wonderful.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

PoeticLicense
Junior Member

since 2001-11-18

Posts 30

17 posted 2001-11-20 06:20 AM

Sooooooo romantic, a sailboat, moonlit night, soft music, and your words. A perfect scene in every way!

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

18 posted 2001-11-20 07:28 AM

The feelings and romance in this just set me to smiling, dreaming, believing in love. Another stunning beauty from your pen. Truly a beautiful lovers dance

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

19 posted 2001-11-20 09:19 AM

*sigh* soooooooo beautiful romantic....love it very much!

Charisma ~TMP~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

20 posted 2001-11-23 11:19 PM

(sigh) Oh Melissa, you are sooooooo romantic, your beautiful words always bring smooth jazz to all our hearts! (sigh) May true love always fill your angelic heart! (sigh) I love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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