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Aflame |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Aflame Aflame with desire she now stands alone waiting with patience born of suffering Her body shinning with a reflection of deepest passion so long held in check Listening quietly she awaits his word that she may now share true love with one man She must learn patience, so she will hold back the tide of feelings that would consume her She feels intense heat as love builds each day hoping that today she can touch his heart Wondering if he is aware that love burns deeply within her for one single man She struggles hard to restrain and contain the building desires that are part of her Still she wants to share the deep love she feels for this man of strength so untouchable The woman stands alone awaiting the one who can fulfill the dreams that fill her nights Karen Torbiak 2001© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Sounds as if you need a fire Extinguisher, just to knock the flames back a little Gloom |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* you are too cute. Can't help the heat...stars are hot you know.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Whewwwwww Karen....the pages are smouldering. Did our star go supercritical tonite? Wow....warm around here.....someone turn on a fan.... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Geesh! Can one make undies from asbestos????  |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
That was exhilarating!!!! ... time for one of Magnus's showers! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
This one is definately warm. "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Look out when you find him...James |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Oh my!!! I must say I can feel the deep desperate desire for love. For this one man! Great write! And I've an idea to make this into a card to send it to someone...  |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
 wow, very sensual yet very tender write....love this Karen.... Greeneyes~ [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-17-2001).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! Love this Karen! When you're hot you're hot! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
If she keeps writing like this, she'll have that man in no time!! Wow!! Excellent, Karen.  All writing comes |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Steamy and well expressed. |
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