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aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2001-11-13 10:20 PM

Looked into the dark, I saw you.
You seemed to be kind, you seemed to be nice.
You held out your hand, smiling at me.
I was scared, I didn’t know what to do.
You comforted me, you prayed for me.
You held me in your arms, you gave me warm.
I wanted to trust you, but I was afraid.
I wanted to hold your hand, I needed you.
Looked into your eyes, I was afraid no more.
I held your hand, I was afraid to be lost.
You held me tight, you led me to light.
You gave me strength to overcome all.
I ought to thank you, but I don’t know how.
I asked your name, but you just smiled.
You didn’t asked for anything,
You just helped me grow to be a stronger man.
I wanted to see you again, I heard a voice said you’re always with me.
I knew this is true and I felt comfort.
I knew this is true because you said it to me.

Love,
Lizzy Vivian
http://members.shaw.ca/home0/

~I'm a person of two faces, Who is neither extraordinary nor plain. I'm not the most outspoken

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2001-11-16 06:51 PM

Lizzy,
It's good to have someone there when you need it most. Well put.

Sin isn't fair, but God got even, grace isn't fair either. larry c

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

2 posted 2001-11-16 07:06 PM

Lizzy,
Well written.
Peaches

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-11-16 10:10 PM

This is lovely writing. Simply beautiful.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2001-11-17 07:44 AM

Very nice Lizzy. If only someone was always there like this. I want to thank you for your reply on my poem, also, that was very thoughtful.
Sandra

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

5 posted 2001-12-09 05:49 PM

*sigh* Such truth in this. I love it!

I am many.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2001-12-09 07:13 PM

(sigh) Such a beautiful poem of comfort! (big hugggssssss) I'm so happy you have someone to comfort you when you need it the most! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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