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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-11-16 02:50 PM


sweet passion building
mind racing with the heartbeat
body drifts behind

Inspired by:   Satin Blue Dream Twister




Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 12-05-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2001-11-16 02:52 PM


nice drifting........a wonderful place to drift in.. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

peaches73533
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2 posted 2001-11-16 03:02 PM


Would be a sweet place to drift.
Peaches

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with you
3 posted 2001-11-16 03:02 PM


heated passion flows
mind is lost to heart's tempo
as we start this dance

Startime
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4 posted 2001-11-17 10:41 AM


*sigh* softly beautiful. I love it.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mon Cherie
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5 posted 2001-11-18 06:55 AM


This is so beautiful...
A sweet case of mind and soul leaving the body momentarily...  

CocoBaci
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6 posted 2001-12-05 12:39 PM


Exquisitely expressed PoetFriend...
*~coco~*

Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2001-12-05 12:42 PM






(sigh) A nirvana of love! (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful! May all our hearts soar into this special fantasy of passion and beauty! (sigh) Your words are always soooooo beautiful, I love them! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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8 posted 2001-12-05 01:00 PM


InterLoper~
Lovely 'inspired' thought of you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
     noles1@totcon.com                

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